I am a Year 5 student. I am in Rimu Hub.
Great story Mac, it sounds like a real horrifying holiday. I'm hooked in! From James
Great mixture of reality and imagination!
YES!It is based on a true story:):)
Wow Mac great imagination that is a very good story. I also like how you did your goal,Punctuation.Keep up the great work.you are so good at writing make believe stories. You also put lots of vocabulary in your story. Well done 👍
nice job mac what a horrifying holiday you had and you really hooked me in and you described it puite well Weldon mac you did a great job.