Thursday, April 30, 2015

The Horrifying Holiday




This is my personal best writing because I used 2 question marks. I used speech marks and tried to remember capital letters for names. Punctuation is my goal. Are you hooked? 

5 comments:

  1. Great story Mac, it sounds like a real horrifying holiday. I'm hooked in! From James

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  2. Great mixture of reality and imagination!

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    1. YES!It is based on a true story:):)


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  3. Wow Mac great imagination that is a very good story. I also like how you did your goal,Punctuation.Keep up the great work.you are so good at writing make believe stories. You also put lots of vocabulary in your story. Well done 👍

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  4. nice job mac what a horrifying holiday you had and you really hooked me in and you described it puite well Weldon mac you did a great job.

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