Monday, November 7, 2016

poem video


This is my poem blog post that I have been working on. My poem is called the Ice Dragons. The most challenging part was getting to say "who breath frost instead of fire" (I often got frost and fire mixed up) as well as finding my poem and the easiest part was the start.



6 comments:

  1. Amazing Mac! You expressed your poem perfectly and it looks so cool. I like how you
    included what you messed up and got confused. You did an amazing job and I wish I could
    be good like you.
    Keep Up The Great Work! :)

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  2. I really enjoyed your performance at the Nui Cultural Evening. You were so confident. I was so proud.

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  3. Mac I really like the way you said "the world grows colder" and "Artic Circle".

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  4. Nice job Mac I really enjoyed it.😎😎😎

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  5. really cool poem mac I like how the dragon breathes frost instead of fire cool !! :) :) :)

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  6. Well done mac I like how mader the reader hooked in!!!:)

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