I am proud of my quick write. This is the story
Once upon a time a person called Nowon lived in Wonkyland. He had never been to Wonkyland. He was excited.
The first thing he did was go on the trampoline . He jumped on to fresh air? "Be careful, do not stand on the clouds you might land on the sky scraper up there" said a little man pointing up. Nowan looked up and saw an upside down sky scraper. He was so shocked he ran into an elevator and got teleported to his house. "This is weird "said Nowon.
Wow great story Mac, it is very interesting and I want to read more.
ReplyDeletewell done Mac keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteWhat an Awesome quick write, Mac!
ReplyDeleteYour punctuation was added in carefully to make sense and your story was very interesting.
I like how you have such a creative mind because this is definitely creative.
Keep up the good blog posts!